This week’s challenge from Chuck
Wendig. TEN WORDS WILL GIVE YOU FIVE
I’m going to a random word
generator. *does that*
There. It has chosen ten random
words.
Those ten words are:
Library
Ethereal
Dolphin
Replay
Undertaker
Storm
Envelope
Cube
Chisel
Satellite
“You will choose five of those
words. (My choices are italicised.)
You will include those five
aspects — not just as words but as actual components of the story — in your 1000-word flash
fiction this week.
Pick words. Write story. Go.”
My effort is 761 words
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For James Herbert who died on
March 20th 2013.
The library.
She loved the public library. She remembered
the supreme joy she felt when she got her very own library card. She had read
the entire children’s section twice. She came there to study after school every
single day. She didn’t really have room at home. She remembered how grown up
she felt when she worked out how to use the self-service machine so that that
the librarian couldn’t see she was borrowing adult books. She still came there
every week as an adult. The library had changed a little. Now there were
computers to use, movies to borrow and audio books to listen to. But it was
still her adventure playground, her safe place in bad times and her very favourite
place to be.
So why wouldn’t it let her leave?
Today, she had zapped her books at
the bar code reader, popped them in her book bag and walked purposefully
towards the only exit, when BAM! She was back in among the shelves. She tried
it a second time with the same result. She was on replay.
She tried again. This time she ended
up in Biographies.
There was only one exit because it
had a magnetic gate to make sure that no one stole any books. A loud alarm
sounded if someone tried it.
She attempted to sneak up on the
exit but that didn’t work either. Large print section. Ugh. She wouldn’t need
to be in this section for a long time yet. It was being rude, now.
She glanced out the window. There was
clearly a nasty storm approaching and she had hoped to be home before it hit. The
clouds looked green. She had wasted fifteen minutes trying to leave and she was
likely to miss her bus. It was an odd thought. She had never wanted to leave the library before.
She watched others to see if they had
the same experience and they were allowed to leave unimpeded. She tried again.
Gardening section. She stared at a book spine labelled ‘the joy of cacti. Yeah,
right. It was painful.
If she didn’t look directly at the
exit, she could see a kind of grey shadow over it. She worked hard at not-looking and she saw out of the
corner of her eye, that there was a cube blocking the exit. It was grey and
transparent and it only worked on her. It was ethereal; not really there.
She stood in front of the not
there ethereal cube and told it severely, “I need to leave. I have washing on the
line and I will miss my bus.”
No response, other than some very
weird looks from the other library patrons.
She stepped forward; sure that
having asked permission, she’d be okay.
Nope.
Non-fiction, etiquette guide.
Right. She got it. She hadn’t
really asked, she had just said she wanted to leave.
“Sorry,” she muttered. “That was
rude.”
This time she stood meekly in front
of it, bowed her head and said, “If you wouldn’t mind, I would like to leave.”
Non-fiction; weather forecasting.
“Oh, I see. It’s the storm.”
“Why?” she asked, just as she
stepped into it again.
Fiction. Horror.
“Ooh. Okay. I think I understand. There
will be a death… maybe mine?”
She approached the cube a final
time. “I think I understand. You let me know when it’s safe to leave.”
This time she turned her back and
walked away. From the corner of her eyes the grey cube seemed to get a pinkish
tinge as if it was pleased with itself.
She settled down in a comfortable
armchair and started to read one of the books she had borrowed.
She was immersed in a world of
dragons and swords and had lost track of the time when the librarian rushed
over to her. “Oh, thank goodness, you are still here. I thought you were on that
bus.”
“What happened?” she asked,
although she suspected that she already knew.
“A huge tree… it fell on the bus…
it’s awful… everyone is dead. The radio said it looks like a scene from a James
Herbert novel.”
“Gosh.”
“How lucky that you stayed.”
“Yes, it was, wasn’t it?”
“I just finished my shift if you’d
like a lift home?”
She glanced from the kindly
librarian’s face to the windows. It was still raining. “Yes, please.”
“I’ll be five minutes. Meet you at
the exit.”
She stood, packed away her book
and walked to the exit.
“Thank you. I love you, too,” she
told the library. “And I will see you tomorrow.”
~~~~
© AM Gray 2013
Beautiful work! Now you just need to use those other five words...bwhahaha!
ReplyDeleteLet's see if I can do it:
The undertaker barely noticed the pink envelope sticking out from the satellite dish that had fallen off his roof. Grasping it, he turned it over and noticed the dolphin sticker on the back. He remembered his daughter used to use stickers on her letters, but she was long since dead. A horrible art accident involving a chisel.
thank you.
DeleteGood start... and then what happened? write a few more words and post it and then put the link on chuck's website!
Great job as always! I love how the grey cube kept shifting her to different parts of the library. Very original and an interesting challenge.
Deleteonly way it could communicate with her.
DeleteThat was cool! Love the use of the words and how the library was protecting her.... :D
ReplyDeletethank you - the library looking after it's favourite patron.
DeleteLove the way you used the library sections as messages and warnings. Great sense of humor.
ReplyDeleteusing itself to communicate
DeleteThis was a treat; thank you. I love the rather banal choice of words to first address the cube!
ReplyDeletelol - yes, she didn't really ask - she told it she needed to leave.
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