I won #Nanowrimo2014
See!
I got three different word counts
in Word, Scrivener and Drive. I can’t tell how they are different (and it’s
quite a lot) so I have over written to cover it.
My daily average was 2,026 words.
I set my usual daily target at 2k anyway. But I did write a few other things
this month; about another 20k. So it is a monthly total of over 80k.
I changed the name of the story to
‘Fate, Chance and a Wizard’ but I am not entirely sure about that, either. Thinking of titles is fiendishly difficult
without making something that is terminally boring or too much like someone
else’s title.
‘The Adventures of Edwin Ash and Conon’
- no
‘Edwin Ash and the journey from
crossroads to capital’ - no - it sounds like a travel diary
‘Wizards, magic and boys, oh, my’
- NO - and there are girls as well.
‘Paths that lead to home’ - no
‘Have wizard; will travel’ - NO
‘The affairs of Wizards’ - a
snatch from Tolkien “Do not meddle in the affairs of Wizards, for they are
subtle and quick to anger.” NO
You get the issue…
There is an African proverb, ‘if
you want to go fast, go alone. If you want to go far, go together.’ To cut it
down the title might be, ‘To go far, go together’ I don’t mind that one and
they do, indeed go far. In fact, all the way… hehe.
‘To go far, go together’
OR
‘Fate, Chance and a Wizard’
I am not sure that either title is
easy to remember; the last thing you want is someone forgetting the name when
they try to order it.
Ah well, I will probably change it
again, anyway.
A large chunk of the story is
written but there is still a lot of detail needed to be added. Rather than get
bogged down in descriptions (I do prefer to write dialogue) I just pop two %%
where I need to research or add more. It is very easy to search for that symbol
later.
There is still a lot more story to
tell and I really like my characters, Edwin Ash the inquisitive boy, and Conon
the wizard who has travelled alone for too long. Edwin drags him into
adventures by asking questions, touching things he shouldn't and demanding
that they help people who are in trouble. And he makes Conon nuts.
“Somebody should do something and
we are somebody,” says Edwin.
He’s so sweet. And eventually my
surly wizard falls in love with him. Just like me.
And then, it all changes when… but
you will just have to read it.
When it’s finished, of course!
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