‘I don’t think Xhe has any
piercings, actually.’
This was the challenge sentence
from a tumblr site called writeworld. I have no title again… sigh. Ah well, I’ll
go with piercings. Imaginative, eh?
He was one of her son’s friends.
So he was the same age as her son, maybe a touch older. But he was tall; very
tall. She had noticed just how tall, when she was walking across the school
yard to pick up her daughter from sick bay. He had jogged over, said hello and
asked her if was she looking for her son. She had said no, and smiled at him.
She was thinking that he was being a good friend.
She had to look up a long way to
do it. He was standing very close to her; too close, and truth be told, he was
way inside her personal space. As she looked up at him, she realised that he
knew it.
And that he had done it
deliberately.
She had a moment in which she
wanted to step back; away from him.
But she didn’t.
She told him her daughter was ill,
and he stepped back and said something about letting her go.
She thanked him. She wasn’t
entirely sure for what, maybe just for noticing her. Noticing that she was
female. That she wasn’t just a mum.
She thought about that encounter
for days. It made her feel … wanted.
She had been divorced for years by that time and the whole process had scared
her off men and dating.
She made sure to ask her son how
Blake was doing. She did it carefully enough not to draw attention, she hoped.
He had a big circle of friends. They spent a lot of time at her place and she
asked after them all.
And then, Blake had shown up at
the door looking for her son. It was raining, and he was soaked through and her
son was out. All her kids were out. She invited him in to dry off.
He gave her that same look.
She put his clothes in the dryer.
She let him into her personal space.
All of this was going through her
mind as she stood at the sink washing up dishes with her daughter.
An endless stream of chatter
accompanied her daughter’s dish drying efforts. She was at an age where she had
a crush on half of her older brother’s friends. “Blake has been selected on the
school basketball team,” she prattled on.
Her mother caught that name among
the others and made a small noise that denoted interest.
“Now we can see if he has any
piercings. It’ll be really obvious in that uniform.”
“I don’t think he has any
piercings, actually,” she said, before she caught herself.
Thank God her daughter didn’t
notice.
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© AM Gray 2013
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