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She peered down at the
half-smudged numbers on her hand. She blinked. When did those get there? They
were on the back of her right hand and she was right handed, so she didn’t
write them. She was not ambidextrous. Her left hand usually accomplished not a
lot in the writing department.
Logic hurt her brain. She fell
back on the bed and groaned. Way too much red wine with friends last night
before she had tumbled herself into a cab. Her eyes closed and she went back to
sleep.
When she woke up again, she wished
she had taken the time to drink a few glasses of water. Her head really hurt.
Staggering out to the kitchen she
rectified the water issue. Leaning against the sink she studied the number. It
was a little more smudged but still legible.
Not enough for a phone number;
landline or mobile. Only four digits, not eight or ten.
What the heck was it? A PIN
number? A postcode? House numbers didn’t normally go up that high where she
lived. And in any case, she had no street name or suburb.
She wrote them on the fridge
whiteboard and left it at that.
And then she scrubbed it off in
the shower.
~~~~~~
The next day there were four more.
She had not gone out. There was no
one else in the house, her flatmate was away.
It was weird.
She wrote those down, too.
~~~~~~
By the morning of the third day,
she had 1231 3401 2832.
She stared at them ... a lot.
~~~~~~
When Craig, her flatmate got home,
the first thing he did was grab a beer from the fridge. “Have you taken up
gambling?” he asked as he took a swig.
“No. Why?”
He pointed the beer bottle at the
board. “Aren’t these your lotto numbers?”
“Lotto?”
“Yeah. You pick six numbers.”
“That isn’t-” And then she
understood what he meant. It could be 12 31 34 01 28 32. Six numbers, not three
groups of four. “Huh,” she said.
Craig waited for her answer but it
didn’t come so he wandered off muttering about having laundry to do.
After staring at the digits for a
minute or so, she grabbed a pen and wrote them out. Then she grabbed her bag
and ran for the local newsagent. She made it with five minutes before closing.
“Ha! I was right,” he said when
she insisted on watching the number draw.
They got more excited as each
number came up until she had ticked them all off.
“You won,” he said in a shocked
voice.
“Yeah.”
There were five prize winners so
the total was split, but $850,000 was enough for her to live on for the rest of
her life.
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© AM Gray 2014
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